bao's is almost split prose, but enough images and concepts rather than concrete description make it poetry.
daph likes short phrases and quiet, solid pronouncements, like "Yet,".
i really liked "you/ are my north star (light my horizon, come home to harbour)". kels writes a bit like me, adjectives and mindpictures.
risse's flows. like bao's, almost prose but fuller. darker. more potent.
andi's, then, is like waves breaking on the beach. wonderful crescendo and then fades gently to a quiet end.
think i liked I, III and IV best.
posted by anne @ 6:20 am
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